[Fushigi Yuugi] Osozaki Blooms, the Remake (1/?)

Finally! The rewrite of Chapter 1 is finished! *cheers* Final word count is 11,354. *wipes sweat off brow* The new chapter reads so much better than the old one there is no comparison.

So, please, read and enjoy... and if you are so moved, please comment. ^_^

( And nearly 11 years later, I give you OB... Chapter 1. Again. )

Questions, comments, papayas?

Nuriko: *sweatdrop* And again with the fruit...

Hotohori: *chuckles* So says the fruit? *rae*

Nuriko: *twitch* You're one to talk! The minute I die you go marry my clone! You can't convince me, in light of that that you had no feelings for me.

Hotohori: *blush*

Tasuki: *fanged grin* This... this is better. Angsty, sure... but feisty as hell. I love it.

Nuriko: *eg* I thought you might. *smirk*

Hotohori: I think I'll be running away, now...

*impish grin* *curtsies*